Once within a forest clearing, whilst I sought my heart some cheering,
With num’rous sorts of very unhealthy choc’late treats I most adore –
While I wandered, knapsack-snacking, dropping errant candy-wrapping,
I thought I heard a quiet flapping, flapping from the forest floor.
“‘Tis no predator,” I whispered, “wrapping from the forest floor –
Only garbage; an eyesore.”
Then came hum’rous Fate permitting; sending to me, most unwitting,
The view of who had made the flapping, from the littered forest floor:
Eager girl scout sitting, beaming, as I jumped up, scared and screaming –
I’m out of words; there is no more.
Haha. Nice poem. Loved knapsack snacking – and had to laugh when the girl guides came a flapping.
LikeLiked by 2 people
That was my favorite line, too! It’s so fun to say. I’ll have to actually complete the couplet later, when not writing a mere 99 words. 😀
LikeLiked by 2 people
Poe-fect! No more, no less than poefect.
LikeLike
Great blog chelsea 👍
Love your poems 😚❤😉
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you. I appreciate your reading them. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
That was brilliant! A sheer delight to read! Thank you for sharing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the complimemt!
LikeLike
The language, unmistakable Poe verse, and the circumstances are a perfect literary storm. Fabulous, Chelsea!
LikeLiked by 1 person
…Quoth the Charli…
LikeLiked by 1 person
And quoth, the Charli did…I read this aloud to a group of Vietnam vets and their wives. It was a huge hit and in return, I gained a shared story from a vet. So thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aw, I’m flattered. 🙂 Thanks for the prompt.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Really good. I’m glad you made the point that litter is an eyesore!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Litter leaves incessant wrappers, flappers when one walks outdoors.
LikeLike
How creative! I love your poetry. Well done. ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you. 🙂
LikeLike
I love this! The flow is perfect, and your word choices divine! Definitely Poesque, but with a hint of chocolate…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Chocolate solves everything, remember?
LikeLiked by 1 person