“Oh, Gustavo! I love you so. Tell me you love me in return.” She batted her long, dark eyelashes.
“Felicia,” he passionately answered, “How can I not? You are heaven to my Earth!”
Sighing, she succumbed to his embrace. He kissed her deeply, tasting a forbidden passion. They pulled apart, then… turn to the author.
Gustavo clears his throat. “Line?”
“What?” The author asks, startled. She looks down at her fingers, poised over the keyboard. “Oh. Sorry, guys. I got caught up in the moment.”
“How about:” Gustavo and Felicia became lost, for a moment, in each other’s eyes…
This was a nice take on the prompt! 😀
Well written, Miss Owens! 🙂
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Thank you. I appreciate your reading it! 🙂
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😂😂😂😂 I love it!
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😀 Thanks!
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Terrific!
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Thanks, Lesley!
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lol nice twist, great writing!
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Thanks, Kate!
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When the writer intrudes on the characters’ lives by getting lost in them…love it!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Yep, fun take and twist. Well done.
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🙂 Thanks for reading!
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Clever and funny, Chelsea! What happens when we get involved in our writing!
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🙂 It’s like a film playing out as we type.
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Well done! This had me going! 😀
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Thanks, Colleen!
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I really like this piece.
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Thank you, Robbie!
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That was rather groovy, I quite enjoyed it.
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Thanks, man. 🙂
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oopsie.. 🙂
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🙂 Love scenes can be engrossing.
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And sometimes, for writers, they already saw the whole scene in their heads but their hands couldn’t catch up writing/typing
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That was exactly what I tried to cram into this tiny story! 🙂
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You should write a book.
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Awe, thanks, Monique! ❤
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