My First Tanka

Roadside dust dirties

My fantastical musings.

Together, with tread,

Obscuring optimism –

Where, thought I, skipped fairies’ feet.

In response to Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday.

Colleen Chesebro May 13, 2018 / 2:04 pm

WOWSER! What a fabulous Tanka poem. Well done. Chelsea, I’m thrilled that you’ve joined the challenge. Welcome. ❤

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- Chelsea Owens May 13, 2018 / 3:21 pm
  
  😀 I doubt it was that amazing, but thanks!
  
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  - Colleen Chesebro May 13, 2018 / 3:46 pm
    
    I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work! 😀
    
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    - Chelsea Owens May 13, 2018 / 5:15 pm
      
      Thank you!
      
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Hélène (Willow Poetry) May 14, 2018 / 8:43 am

Beautiful tanka, I so love the last line!!

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- Chelsea Owens May 14, 2018 / 8:49 am
  
  Thank you, Hélène!
  
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