Down there, I see
you searching
Waving
Gesturing
Flashing
in wonder
Grounded.
Do you dream,
in the mud?
do you think do you feel do you wish do you want do you
live?
Inspired by Frank Prem’s speck on the blue.
Photo Credit:
William Hook
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Chel Owens 
So small we are, Chelsea. High or low, the same.
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Small, yes. Similar, yes.
Yet, I’d rather be flying. 🙂
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Ha! Well, if I can do it, I reckon you can. too.
Set your mind for flight.
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Reblogged this on Frank Prem Poetry and commented:
Delighted to share this response poem by Chelsea Owens to my own speck on the blue.
Thank you Chelsea.
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Aw. ❤ Thanks, Frank.
What can I say? You’re inspirational.
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In a word, yes. Do you? Very nicely done.
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In my ever-evaporating dreams.
Frank wrote from the perspective of someone on the ground looking up. I began my response similarly, then this whole thing came out…
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Higher up gives you a better perspective.
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🙂 Yes!
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