Were I a god
I’d start
here
here, with nothing
a great compression of
nothing
till the built-up force of spaces between the nothing nothing nothing
exploding
expanding
extrapolating
cause slivered bits of, simply, everything.
Were I a god
I’d start
there
there, with slivers
a sparkling shower of
slivers
till, gathered, they form a winking blinking ball of thunk thought think
longing
learning
living
condensations of, really, sentience.
Were I a god
I’d start
everywhere
everywhere, with sentience
a malleable mess of
sentience
till the clumps of godmade intelligences breathe stretch move
dreaming
daring
dancing
flaming forms of, actually, life.
In answer to Frank Prem’s analysis (in the end the flame)
Really enjoyed this 💕
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Thanks, Candace!
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Awesome Writing, Chelsea!!!
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❤ Thank you, Beckie!
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You’re welcome, Chelsea. Have a wonderful evening! 😊
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Nicely done, Chelsea.
Bravo.
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Thanks! It’s almost the response I sought for your poem…
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You did well.
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🙂
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You are a god, Chelsea. Now get to work. 👿
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🔥
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Cool!
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Thanks, D.!
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So nothing than slivers than sentience. What comes next. What does your world look like. Just remember safe guard your liver…..and I don’t mean Hannibal.
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Ah! I was creating man. His world comes next… 🌎
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Lovely writings.. I enjoyed reading..;-)
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Thank you, Lisa! 🙂
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And you think you’re bad at poetry! Absolute proof otherwise.
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No, silly. The word is “terrible.”
But, thank you!
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This is really good.
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Thank you!
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Awesome! Hahaha, I wrote one inspired by the song “Sleeping at Last – Saturn”. Please have a look if you get a chance. Im new on here and trying to get all my stuff into a blog for the first time ever, haha.
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Thanks for reading. Yours is good; I liked it.
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Yay! 😀 I’m glad you liked it!
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