“Elephants are pregnent fohr two years!”
“Really?”
“Uh-huh. Dhey also have duh biggest bwains of mammals.”
She smiled in the rearview mirror at her son. He sat hunched over his animal facts book.
“You know,” she ventured, “there’s a saying that ‘an elephant never forgets.’ Maybe because of their big brains.”
He didn’t answer. She knew he heard; he always did. That, the slight speech impediment, and his obsession with one topic made adults think he didn’t.
She sighed and rubbed her stomach, wondering how he’d handle being a big brother. Unlike an elephant, they only had nine months.
Written in response to Carrot Ranch‘s prompt this week. If there’s one thing I think of with sisu, it’s pregnancy.
May 2, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about sisu. Itβs a Finnish concept of enduring strength, the ability to consistently overcome. Think long-term. Go where the prompt leads!
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Casey Allen
Aww, how cute! Nice job writing the speech impediment.
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Thanks! It helps that one of my boys is STILL difficult to understand sometimes. π
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He’ll figure it out!
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It gets a bit better each year. π
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He’ll probably be a wonderful big brother. π Great story, Chelsea.
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He’s a mix of two of mine. They’ve been pretty fun big brothers for the last five years or so. π
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Ah beautiful. Is it a true story?
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A bit. The boy is more of a mashup of two of mine and other autistic/Asperger kids I’ve spoken with.
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Blessings to you.
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Because of all the boys? π
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Yes. And challenges!! π
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The pregnancy part was fictional, too. Sorry. π
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Ha… good story.
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Brilliant take Chelsea and done so well. We are so guilty of assuming anyone that is not just like is us less than. I love the delicate way you handled that.
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Thanks, J. π It’s thanks to my kids.
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I really thought you had gone for number five when I read this. Nice story Chelsea.
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For some reason, I just read your comment. π I wrote this in thinking about how long pregnancy is, and imagined a conversation with a sort of mix of my second and third children.
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Well written.. a story in a few words.. π
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Thank you, Lisa!
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Chelsea, I appreciate the way you introduce the character, showing the relationship the mom has. It makes me think 9 months will be plenty of time.
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Thanks, Charli. I think she’s patient enough. π
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This story shows a lot of compassion, Chelsea. I like it. I agree that pregnancy is a great example of sisu. But imagine two years of it! No, don’t! π
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Exactly! I still would have liked more of a 3 day stint, though. π
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I know just what you mean!
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