Flowered pots and colored notes
fly gently on the walls;
Whose smiling, standing stick-men
Wave out from rainbowed pen?
Wrinkled cheeks and vacant eyes
of startling, once-clear blue;
What’s inside now, Oh Gramma dear?
What’s cloudy and what’s clear?
Gnarled hands and anxious grip
that once held mine with love;
Whose fingers do you think these are?
Whose hand felt from afar?
Silent words and down-turned mouth
mar lips that laughed and spoke;
What joke or story would you say?
What do you think today?
Who are these strangers milling round;
unfamiliar people?
Where is the you
You know?
Remembered for Carrot Ranch‘s weekly prompt: growing older
May 9, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about growing older. It can be humorous, dark or poignant. It can be true or total fiction. It can be fine wine or an old fossil. Go where the prompt leads!
Respond by May 14, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read and be social. You may leave a link, pingback or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form. Rules & Guidelines.
Photo Credit:
Cristian Newman
Very poignant, Chelsea.
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Thank you.
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Nice – I think you captured the perspective of several participants in Gramma’s life here.
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Thank you.
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This hits so close to home.. You created beauty and heartache and sadness and confusion.. So well done.
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Thanks, J. It’s close…
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Definitely doesn’t belong in your bad poetry competition…
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Awww. ❤ What a nice compliment!
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Kind of a round-about one. I’m glad you caught it…
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Oh, I know that a compliment from Masercot may take a little sifting to find…
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“Charlie”
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I usually think of you as “Bob,” but that works. 🙂
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After my first hundred followers, I told everyone my first name so they’d have something to call me. When I get to five hundred, I’m going to post my genome on-line…
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Do we get dental records at 1K?
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If you’re good…
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Or suspicious.
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So lovely, Chelsea!
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Thank you, Charli.
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