Great news! I won second place for the poem I submitted to the Annual Bloggers Bash!
…I’m a bit miffed that “Silent but Tardy” wasn’t a contender, but totally stoked that I actually won something! I’ve included the winning entry below, which I submitted from my motherhood site.
Five More Minutes
Five more minutes to sleep alone,
To dress in peace,
To check a phone.
Five more minutes to eat my food,
To eat it warm,
To eat it chewed.
Five more minutes to sit right here,
To read a book,
To disappear.
Five more minutes is not that long,
To feel the guilt,
To feel the wrong;
When
Five more minutes is what I seek
Five more minutes is all I need
Five more minutes, or maybe three,
Is all I long for, to just be me.
Photo Credit:
Jordan Whitt
©2019 Chelsea Owens
Congratulations, Chelsea. That’s well done.
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Thank you, Frank!! I know my poetry’s improved since I started reading so many great poets. 🙂
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Frequency of writing and persistence makes masters of us all.
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Congrats!
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Thanks! 🙂
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BOOM – Congrats
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😀 Thanks!
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You’re just due all kinds of congratulations this month!
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Rather amusing that the two ‘events’ worth congratulating are opposites…
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You think so?
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Ha ha. I saw what you did there. Thanks!
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That is a nice poem!
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🙂 Thank you.
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Totally well deserved..
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Thanks, Geoff. 🙂 …are you one of the judges?
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Nope, no blame attaches here!
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I never believe you’re innocent.
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Fair enough
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So well done. You have so much talent.
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Thanks! 🙂
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Guzzah! You deserve the creds!
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Thanks!! 🙂
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Wow I just realized I had a g on my huzzah… D: So, uh, I meant the right thing!
Huzzah!
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I just pictured you doing a Star Trek “Huzzah” and it all made sense…
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Congrats! 🙂
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Thanks! 🙂
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Very nice!!
I did however think the last line would end with “pee” 😹😹😹
“Is all I long for, is just to pee.”
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The true mother’s lament. 😀 The poem went sentimental on me, though.
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Wow. Well done. My writing has won nothing. Ever.
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I was in the same boat!
…Wouldn’t you say that getting a publisher is winning something?
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That would never win a bad poetry contest…
Congratulations!
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❤ How sweet. Thank you!
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Congratulations Chelsea. Are you going to spend the Amazon gift certificate or frame it?
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Hey; that’s an idea! Maybe they send me an official certificate with it and I can frame THAT.
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Congrats. Nice to receive an occasional extrinsic reward!
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Thank you. 😀
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Well done and well deserved.. 😉
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Aw, thanks, Lisa!
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Very cool! Congratulations!
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Thank you, Trent!
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Congratulations Chelsea! You write good stuff! I’m glad you got rewarded for it!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Congratulations, Chelsea!
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Thank you, Mr. Fishman. 🙂
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Congrats! 😀
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Thanks!
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Congratulations! I love the piece!
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Thank you, Penny!
(Sorry for responding so tardily; I had to save your comment from the Spam.)
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That’s ok, it happens. 🙂
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Congratulations! I love the poem… took me back almost forty years when my daughter wouldn’t leave me alone to pee 🙂
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So I’ll get to pee eventually?
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Can you hold it until they start kindergarten? 🙂
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That WAS the plan as my youngest goes in this Fall. And then this pregnancy thing happened and restarted the whole waiting period…
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I’d have suggested you creep to the loo in the wee hours before dawn (maybe that’s why they’re called the wee hours 🙂 ) but with a baby playing drums on your bladder you’ve got no chance of lasting that long 😉
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🙂 I steal a minute here and there.
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congratulations- this is beautifully written & so relatable!
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❤ Thanks!
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congratulations!
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Thanks!
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