Smoky, slatted sunlight lay in lines across the staring face. Soon, only a muted glowing shone there as the associated hand pulled the blinds closed again. *Snap*
He’d said he’d be different; for one more day. That had been a gigantic step, vocalizing. Into the dark of night and mind he’d stood and whispered, “Tomorrow, I go out.”
A laugh escaped the lips. Whose, he did not know; but then, he did. A distant memory of non-lined sunlight views and happier company than his own filtered to recollection.
Then; he was sure he’d laughed. Then; she had, too.
What came to me for Carrot Ranch‘s prompt this week: for one day.
July 25, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes the phrase “for one day.” The words single out a special occurrence. What is the emotion and vibe, where does it take place and why? Go where the prompt leads!
Respond by July 30, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read, and be social. You may leave a link, pingback, or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form. Rules & Guidelines.
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Ethan Sykes
©2019 Chelsea Owens
This looks like fun! Beautifully written.
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Thank you, Mathew. 🙂
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P.s. I don’t know if you participate in Awards, but I’ve nommed you for a Liebster 🙂
My questions are fun btw.
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Thanks!
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Wow, this is powerful.
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Thanks! It came out thus.
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That was intense.
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Thanks! Deep feelings certainly are.
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a terrific mood piece; you’ve accomplished a lot in a tiny space
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Thanks, John.
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Great short read.. so interesting.. 😉
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Thanks, Lisa!
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Being agoraphobic does involve a lot of broken promises to one’s self and loved ones…
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Indeed. Mix a shot of depression and a spritz of bereavement and he’s lucky to open the blinds.
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Vocalizing is a big step. That realization and willingness to speak to it often leads to more verifiable successes!
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Baby steps
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Intriguing, Chelsea, and interesting response. Sounds like he’s known better times but is gathering his strength for better times, hopefully, ahead.
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I hope so. I think I’ve caught him while he’s still just making it each day.
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Seems that way. I hope his life becomes more enjoyable.
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Packed quite a bit in this small piece. One small step every day… one can only hope for that some times.
(My icon does not go to my open site. You have to go to the title link at CR or here for my contribution
My Darling, … )
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Thanks! And thanks!
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🙂 & 😉
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A big step to overcome the slatted view from inside, and well-told. I especially like how you wove the laughs into the story.
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Thank you, Charli. Are you a home owner yet?
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This is beautifully written.
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Thanks.
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