Never Forget the Soap

“It happened again.”

“What?”

“The door.”

….?

“The door of the laundry room.”

….

*Sigh* “It hit me on the way out again.”

“Oh…” “Well…” “It’s just a door.”

“It doesn’t hit me every time.”

“Huh.”

“I’m serious!”

“I know! -Look, maybe you’re just jumping to conclusions.”

….

“Like, you know, that… say, air currents from a different door or whatever sometimes close that one.”

“On me.”

“…Yeah.”

“Never on you.”

“…Yeah.”

“Never on anyone else.”

“Yeah!”

“And only when I start a load at midnight.”

“Yeah! -wait; why are you starting laundry at -”

“And only when I can also hear whispering…”

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Inspired by my own laundry room experiences for Carrot Ranch‘s prompt: someone unremembered.

September 26, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about someone unremembered. Is it a momentary lapse or a loss in time? Play with the tone — make it funny, moving, or eerie. Go where the prompt leads you!

Respond by October 1, 2019. Use the comment section below to share, read, and be social. You may leave a link, pingback, or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form.  Rules & Guidelines.

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Photo Credit: Ryoji Hayasaka

 

©2019 Chelsea Owens

20 thoughts on “Never Forget the Soap

  1. Lwbut October 1, 2019 / 7:05 pm

    so… did you remember the soap??

    How about the fabric conditioner? 🙂

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  2. Charli Mills October 1, 2019 / 10:45 pm

    That could cure me from doing laundry! Especially the whispering, chilling!

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    • Chelsea Owens October 1, 2019 / 11:00 pm

      😀 I need no whispering to cure me from doing laundry.

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  3. Jules October 2, 2019 / 7:58 am

    When you have a young family you do chores whenever you can! But forgetting the soap just means you might have wet but not clean laundry! I remember as a child, once I was in bed I even disliked getting up after everyone was asleep to use the loo… I think though after about 30 years in the same place I can go anywhere anytime in my home 😉

    Ghosts can be helpful too 😉 Fun take!

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    • Chelsea Owens October 2, 2019 / 1:23 pm

      I’m not sure I could write a scary bathroom story! I often get scared at night in there even as an adult!

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      • Jules October 2, 2019 / 2:05 pm

        A spider in the shower? – I think Charli had one of those…

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        • Chelsea Owens October 2, 2019 / 2:08 pm

          Spiders aren’t so bad to me. 🙂 Ghosts, now; that’s a different story.

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          • Jules October 2, 2019 / 2:59 pm

            There are folks who seem to be more tuned into different phenomenon. I think when I was a teen we had a poltergeist – that or like the one comic all the blame falls to Ida Know and Not Me…

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