From June 29, 2017, an epic poem I’m stinkin’ proud of:
Oh, hark! -and hear my tale of old –
‘Tis true in ev’ry way:
The ballad of the garbage truck,
A loud, machine-drawn dray.
The daylight barely paints the East,
The weary man just waked;
A stirring in the quiet air,
A song of metal brakes.
How now, my lads? What sings this sound?
What draws attentive eyes,
A-pressed against the window panes,
Or gathered round outside?
Oh, feel: the porch, the walk, the lane!
Oh, see: the living things!
They shake and dart in worried dance
Of what the daybreak brings.
The song exults effulgently
As it comes round the turn:
Vehicular efficiency
As refuse is o’erturned.
Majestic rolls the garbage truck;
Ungainly -yes, but true.
A dutiful collectioner
Of everyone’s snafu.
©2019 Chelsea Owens
I absolutely love it. Dr. Seuss would be proud.
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❤❤ The highest compliment. 😀
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Love it!
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Thank you!
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Written to sound centuries old…bravo, splendid indeed.
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Thank ye!
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So funny and yet beautiful
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My beautiful, stinky love!
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My grandson is two years old and he loves the recycle/garbage truck that serves our neighborhood.He waits in the drive for the truck on Tuesday mornings and wears a shirt proclaiming that “Recycling Day is My Favourite Day”
The driver has told us that he has a Christmas present planned.
What joy
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❤ That’s wonderful! Our garbage man in our last house used to bring little candies and such -my boys LOVED watching for him even before that because they loved garbage trucks.
I made him a present when he retired.
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That is the way things are supposed to be. This makes me happy.
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Oh very cool!! Very cool!
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Thanks!
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I don’t usually like poetry, but that was a fun piece.
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Thanks! I prefer poetry with something interesting to it, myself. 🙂
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One of my dear friends is mad about garbage trucks. Next time I see him I will tell him I know a talented lady who has written a poem about one.
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😀 My son really liked them. We used to watch YouTube videos of them, and we gave him a toy version for that year’s Christmas.
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Right you are at being proud- I can hear the clanks and whirs… The meter is perfection and the visuals superb.
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Thank you! ‘Twas a noble work. 🙂
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Hee, hee! But has no one told you, garbage trucks are now “sanitation vehicles?!?” 😉
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That just might throw off my rhyming meter….
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And it wouldn’t be an excellently “bad” poem without that rhyming meter. 🙂
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No, though maybe we could make a horrible, politically-correct one! 😉
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Have you read this to your kids? Some kids love trash trucks.
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I think one of my sons was my inspiration, originally. 🙂
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This is brilliant. For some reason I’m either seeing Christopher Lee or Brian Blessed read this.
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😀 I can’t answer why for that.
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We’d be in a sorry mess without them!
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Too true, milady.
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you make the garbage truck sound rather dandy…
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Indubitably!
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