“What’s this, Grammy?” Pearla’s granddaughter, Ella, squatted on the old hutch, something wooden in her hand.
“Ah. That’s the lovespoon Grampy brought back from Wales.”
Ella retrieved another piece. “An’ this one?”
“A model plane your Daddy-”
“An’ this one?”
“Aunt Michelle’s locket from-”
“An’ this one?”
Pearla laughed and kissed the curly-haired forehead. “Slow down, Ella, dear.”
“Sorry, Grammy.” Ella pulled something from the shadows. “An’ this one?”
“That’s-” Pearla choked; whispered, “Those were your Aunt Ella’s.” Taking and returning the tiny baby shoes, Pearla took the living Ella’s hands, instead. “What do you think about making cookies?”
Captured for Carrot Ranch‘s prompt: hutch
January 2, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about something found in a hutch. It can be any kind of hutch — a box for critters or a chest for dishes. Go where the prompt leads!
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©2020 Chelsea Owens
Well done. Like if Hemingway had 93 more words.
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Wow. Thanks, D.
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This is beautiful, Chelsea, but very sad.
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Thank you, Robbie. It’s what came from writing Pearla.
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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 emotional!
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You’re telling me!
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So sad but well written, Chelsea 🙂 x
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Thank you, Carol.
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That choked me up, Chelsea. I could feel the spritely innocence of the inquisitive child brushing up against an unhealed loss. Well written.
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Thank you, Charli.
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A sad take on “for sale, baby shoes, never worn”
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You’re right. I’d forgotten that one.
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*that idea
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You have reminded me of those in the family who did not live… The children that died too young… and from a time that nothing was left to remember them by. I have a small gold ring that used to have an initial on it that was my MIL’s – it was supposed to be for a sister that perhaps was born before her, but did not live. MIL wore it all of her life…until close to the end when it no longer fit…
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❤ I’m fairly certain the story came to me because of my grandmother’s daughter who only lived a few days.
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A touching story.
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Thanks, Norah. 🙂
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