The post
Sky ghosts,
is never late.
‘gainst earthbound weight.
In backward cars
Self-lifted, ours
down country roads,
with cloud-held loads.
the smart-dressed man
The barefoot clan
(or, smart wò-man)
(and –true– bare-hand)
comes round each day
cavort and play,
to drop a note;
whilst ‘letters’ float
turn down a flag.
from heav’nly bags.
for
for
Neither snow
When winds blow
nor rain
‘gainst wingèd pain
nor heat
-lofty feet,
nor gloom of night
always in flight-
stays these couriers
windflung ferriers.
from the swift completion
Our mail tote: depletion,
of their appointed rounds.
Soaring o’er the rabbl’ing ground.
Written for Carrot Ranch‘s prompt: a postal carrier in an extreme situation.
©2020 Chelsea Owens
January 30, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a postal carrier in an extreme situation. Even if you base your story on a true one, focus on the core trait of this postal carrier. Go where the prompt leads!
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That’s a really interesting structure, Chelsea. I like the way you interweave the lines to emphasise the contrast.
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Thanks, Norah. It came out that way. I’m reminded of a spoken poetry book my mother liked and would read with us, titled Joyful Noise.
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I know that book. That’s what I was thinking of, poems for two voices.
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I need to read it with my kids.
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How wonderful! 🙂
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Quickly becoming a lost art I fear…..
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Yes. They primarily deliver Amazon.
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I love that.. 😉
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Thanks!
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I like the way you approached the prompt, Chelsea. Amazon is building a terminal in Ontario airport. It also has a large warehouse with lines of trucks.
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Thanks, Miriam. Yes; Amazon has both revived and overworked the postal system.
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Both a clever pastiche of that teeth-grinding habit of poets who spread their words incoherently across the page to disguise their vacuity and an exhilarating waterfall of images. I suspect that in summoning up the ghost of Ern Malley you have shot yourself in your artistic foot. Love it.
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😀 The best critique I’ve heard all day! 😀
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That is quite the interplay of 99 words.
Can you see me? My hat is off.
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Thank you, D. ❤
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Love the layout!
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Thanks, Liz!
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