Pal spat into the wind, instantly regretting he’d done so. “Ware be Kid?” he growled as he wiped his face.
“Ware be you?” the wind answered.
Pal whipped around. He slid off the rocky outcropping he’d carefully climbed and scooted across just a few minutes before. His gun flew after him, landing stock first into a Saguaro and shooting its contents sky-high.
“Hey!” yelped the cactus, falling over.
Pal squinted. “Kid?”
“Nah, yer gramma.”
Pal laughed. “Welp,” he said, standing and walking over to his dusty, cactus-clad friend. “I guess you won this here round o’ hide ‘n seek.”

©2020 Chel Owens
I’m sure D. Avery would object to playing games in the desert, but this came about ‘cuz o’ Carrot Ranch‘s prompt:
October 1, 2020, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that happens on the dusty trail. It can take place anywhere. Who is your character, where are they going, and why? Bonus points if they meet up with Kid and Pal from D. Avery’s Ranch Yarns and Saddle Up Saloon (they hit the trail so TUFF could take over the saloon). Go where the prompt leads!
Respond by October 6, 2020. Use the comment section [on Carrot Ranch’s site] to share, read, and be social. You may leave a link, pingback, or story in the comments. If you want to be published in the weekly collection, please use the form. Rules & Guidelines.
Also, consider moseying over to The Ranch tomorrow, and every Monday this month, to participate in their TUFF challenge. The final submission will be at the end of October. There will be prizes!!
Lol 😆
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Thanks, Willow. 🙂
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Chel is this for the TUFF challenge? Love the sugaro by the way. X
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Nah, just for the fun one.
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Well it is a very good response to the prompt x
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❤❤ Aw, shucks.
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Anyone who lives near the desert and owns a shotgun has fantasized about shooting a cactus in the face…
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😀 I only fantasized about not living near the desert ever again.
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I loved El Paso… But, the more severe deserts, I think I could also do without, Chelsea…
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I think you’re suggesting I shouldn’t have lived near The Mojave.
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Suggesting? Hell, I’d tattoo it on my arm…
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You get the bonus points, Chelsea. What a fun story!
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All right! 😀 Thanks, Norah.
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That was a fun one! 😂
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Thanks!
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An unexpected hide-and-seek game even though it was hinted at in the title.
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Right? Should’ve seen it coming. 😉
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I’m D. Avery and I approve this message. (Though I am going to give Pal a talking to regarding shotgun safety. Play, but play safely, People.)
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😀 I thought you’d tell me he wouldn’t have misfired so irresponsibly…
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Ya needled Pal n’ Kidd just right! 🙂
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Why, thank ye, ma’am!
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Ha, ha! Never a good idea to spit in the wind!
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It all comes back to you when you do!
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So clever–you did a real bang-up job with this. Fun!!
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Ah, thanks, Liz!
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That would be an intensive hide and seek – to be found with bullets!
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Hide and seek: Hardcore mode
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