Skarla pulled her covers up,
A mask over her head.
Her mummy came with steaming cup
And asked, “Why haunt your bed?”
“Oh, Mum! The kids say, ‘SKELETON!’
“They run away in fear.”
Her mummy groaned. “Aww, that’s no fun.
“They just don’t know you, Dear.”
And then, they heard a creepy gong;
Some kids were at their door.
Skar dried her tears; Mum came along,
Bones clunking on the floor.
Skarla’s friends said, “Trick or treat!”
And, “Skar! Where have you been?”
Smiling, Skarla donned a sheet
And went out, with her friends.

Written for Susannah Leonard Hill’s Halloweensie Contest.
©2020 Chel Owens
Spooky (in a fun classic Chelsea way!)
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Thanks! Just before the deadline!
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Well done, Chelsea. You have some very clever use of words in there. Good luck!
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Phew! Thank you, Norah!
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I love the rhythm and the story. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you! ❤
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Sounds like she has a nice Mummy.
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She gets unraveled sometimes, but she has a good heart.
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❤
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Thanks!
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No problem😁
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This is great fun to read! I love the ‘Bones clunking on the floor’ line!
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Thank you! ❤
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Me too—the ‘bones clunking’ line was my absolute favorite bit. Very cute story!
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❤ Thank you!
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Lol. I hope little Skar had a fun Halloween. 😀
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I’m sure she did!
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I am glad Skarla was able to go trick-or-treating, but I am pretty sure I do not want to meet her mummy!! Good luck!
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Like most mummies, she has a good heart – not necessarily inside, but a good heart.
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Ha ha!
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I love the personality you infused into your characters! Really fun read with a lot of heart!
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Thank you!
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Such a great voice and wordplay!
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Thanks!
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Great rhyming! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Amazing story! I’m jealous of how well you can rhyme. I love a good story that doesn’t call attention to the rhyme. You are a pro at that!
Happy Halloweensie!
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Thank you so much! I try but am always picking critically at my verse when I read it later!
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I love how you created so much history with Skar’s friends and the wonderful relationship between her and her mummy in so few words! Well done!
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Aw, shucks. Thanks.
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Oh, to be accepted for what and who we are!
Though I think I’d like to keep some of my family skeletons in the shadows of the closet! 😀
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😀 Good point.
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Skar is such a sweet, sensitive skeleton. Great poem!
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Very cute story. What a nice Mummy and Skarla resolved her problem. Nice!
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Thank you!
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Yes skeletons out the closet and have fun with it.. 😉
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….I should have made her bedroom in the closet! I guess we’ll illustrate it that way!
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Great, fun read! 🎃
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Thank you!
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This is so cute
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Thank you!
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Lovely characters and rhythm! Her mummy and friends are so sweet—and she goes out trick or treating ❤️
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Thank you, Heather!
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What sweet characters, how Mummy and friends are there for her.
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Thanks!
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Aww, Skarla Skeleton has good friends! Maybe she and Scarlett can go out trick-or-treating next year!
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After reading the entries, it sounds like she might have a lot of friends! 🙂
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Spooky and most excellent
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Thank you!
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Skar and her mum make a sweet pair. So glad Skarla’s friends came by! A tender tale, Chel!
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❤ Thank you!
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This is the kind of thing I like – bad guy creatures that are good.
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What about cute bad guy characters, for children?
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Depends on the kid, probably.
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