
Footsteps, shushed
Amidst Nature’s
Leavings –
Leafings.
or
An expensive carpet, this
Underlayment of leaves
Taken and spread
Underneath these bare trees.
Mind you don’t tread as a somber old man;
Neither should you tiptoe -run, kick, and dance.
——–
©2021 Chel Owens
Acrostic isn’t my favorite ‘form’ for poetry, but can function as a framework for trying to shape a poem. Try it out; especially consider trying it out for my latest Anyone Can Poem challenge at Carrot Ranch!
I did not realize the pattern of the first letters until you told me – very clever!
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❤ Thanks, Jim! 🍂
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Absolutely beautiful 💜
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Thanks!!
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Looking good!
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Thanks!
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Nice one
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Thank you!
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Summer
Unfortunately
Meanders around
Pushing fall by the wayside
This is the new normal thanks to climate change
Every year the AC stays on longer
Replacing what was once Autumn/Fall with a summer winter hybrid
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You said it!
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Sumpter Sucks, I’ll take Autumn any day
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I love all the colors, and the cooler nights.
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Whine please
It’ll do you good
No need to tease
The hopeful fleas
Entire hoods
Remand their cheese
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😀 Ooooh-kay.
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I like the second, though I always kick the leaves 😁
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I’d expect nothing less!
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Very clever. I like that a lot. Made me smile when I noticed it. You are good at this.
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Thanks! 🍁🍂
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Awe, I think you did just fine. Somewhere I did and Elfje acrostic series. I created what I call acrosTic poems…When you repeat the same word; acrostics like this one from several years ago on another blog of mine that is now closed.
LIGHT
(an acrosTic Elfje series)
Lift
Intangible the
Grief shadowing my
Heart as dawn rises
Today
Lace
Indigo sky
Greeting new beginnings
Harmoniously within hundreds of
Thoughts
Listen
Intently to
Gentle prayers seeking
Help from every resourced
Truth
Look
Inward and
Grant serenity as
Hours pass with minutes
Today
Lean
Into hugs
Gifts of communication
Having abilities to heal
Thoroughly
©JP/dh
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Oooh. I like it, Jules. I feel that just noting the poem as ‘Acrostic’ is rather loose and that it needs more, as you’ve done.
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😀
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