I held time today.
It felt all sifty, like new-cast snow
yet
parts of it were not.
…Like clay.
-or gravy-
Yes! Time is gravy, I decided, as I rubbed its siftiness between my hands and tried to keep it
-grasp it-
-STOP IT!-
It both thickened and dissolved
leaving behind half-finished projects
…well-meant regrets.
I held time today, and wished for mashed potatoes.

Β©2021 Chel Owens
Thought-provoking
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My thoughts were provoked. π
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This made me chuckle, Chel. If i want time to stand still now, I’ll just leave my gravy in it’s little boat.π
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Exactly! Lesson learned.
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π
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Nice
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Thank you!
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Fine thoughts.
Has your gravy boat sailed, Chel? π
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My friend got me a t-shirt that reads ‘I run a tight shipwreck.’ Somehow, your comment reminded me of that…
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hahah ; loved the whimsy of this π
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John! You’ve skipped over here to witness the influence of your poetry. π
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thanks,Chel; you’re too kind π
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Thyme might go better with mashed potatoes.
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π€ Hm. Tell me, can you put this thyme in a bottle?
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So they tell me.
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Wonderful Chelsea, the imagery was perfect
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β€ Aw; thanks, D.
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Oooh, if only time was like sweet potato fries. Well, I’d gobble it up too fast. Lima beans would be better. The minutes would sit around forever.
Loved your poem and your analogies. Lol.
Hope you’re doing well, Chel. Happy Holidays.
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I love sweet potato fries! Thanks, Diana. Merry Holidays and all that to you!!
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You are so good at this π
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Thank you.
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who doesn’t wish for mashed potatoes?
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I wonder that.
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ahhh this one: I remember now: great poem, and last line π
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Speaking of, I think you should write a poem of all last lines.
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that;s a big ask, Chel — but will give it some thought: hey! what I could do is cull last lines from me lesser known poems — of which there are many π
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Loving how you weave in food to this delectable piece!
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Thank you!
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