The Measure of a Man’s Best Friend

The Greyhound halted. This was where $200 took James. He disembarked, shouldered his prison-issued backpack, and read the station’s name: Kum & Go.

“Here to rob it?”

James swung to see a man by a pickup; opened his mouth, then shut it. The man had no legs. The truck had a dog.

-But not just any dog. “Buttercup!”

The yellow lab hurtled out and licked him, desisting at her master’s call. James had trained her in prison, as a service animal for a wounded soldier.

James looked up, and both men saw each other -clearly- for the first time.

©2022 Chel Owens

Oh my goodness, Charli! Don’t ever make me do that, again! -I mean, This was written in response to Charli’s prompt at Carrot Ranch:

May 16, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about when a newly released prisoner meets the disabled veteran who adopted the puppy the prisoner trained behind bars. The prompt is based on the short story I wrote for Marsha Ingrao’s Story Chat. Yes, rewrite my story in your words, 99, no more, no less. Go where the prompt leads!

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22 thoughts on “The Measure of a Man’s Best Friend

  1. Doug Jacquier May 19, 2022 / 1:01 am

    ‘The man had no legs. The truck had a dog.’ Excellent work, Chel. Captured the essence of the original in 99. (I still think Buttercup is a dumb name for a dog but don’t tell Charli.) 🙂

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    • Chel Owens May 19, 2022 / 1:32 am

      Oh my, Doug! I haven’t popped over to read yours -but that was so hard! I had much better story-telling elements at 135 words. 🙂

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    • Chel Owens May 19, 2022 / 1:37 am

      …I see you haven’t yet. Get writing; you can do it!

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      • Doug Jacquier May 19, 2022 / 12:28 pm

        I’ve done it, Chel, just haven’t posted it yet on either my or Marsha’s blog. It will appear in Charli’s summary later.

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        • Chel Owens May 19, 2022 / 12:52 pm

          I’ll read it then, then.

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    • Chel Owens May 19, 2022 / 8:25 am

      ❤ Thanks! This was a difficult one for me to parse down.

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  2. Marsha May 19, 2022 / 1:56 pm

    You did a great job parsing down, Chel. It had all the elements of Charli’s story. Could I use it as my 99-word summary this month? I always write one for each story, and yours is already perfect. My 99-word story has a little more added information, and I’ve gotten some comments that I could take out some of those words. LOL I would link back to this post, of course.

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    • Chel Owens May 19, 2022 / 1:59 pm

      Wow; really? I don’t mind. I do feel badly that parsing meant removing many of Charli’s details like being out in a cornfield and how chance the meeting was …ooh, and the details of the people and their expressions. Oh well.

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      • sherijkennedy May 19, 2022 / 2:59 pm

        I like it parsed down without those types of details. Puts the focus on the power of them seeing each other for real. Very poignant story. I think you did a Great job! I said, “Wow,” when I read the last line.

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      • Marsha May 19, 2022 / 8:49 pm

        Your story was wonderful. You could write it ten times and it would probably be more awesome and very different each time you wrote it. I love this version, though. 🙂

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  3. Jules May 22, 2022 / 11:56 am

    Ah… I did a summary too. Seeing each other for the first time, hopefully with compassion and understanding 😀

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