Flip – flap – flutter
went the bits of man-made rubber
as he took away the rudder
and he waved goodbye to mother.
‘I’m an engine of the sky,’
sang he, loud, while he sped by,
while his mama dabbed her eye,
while his wobbly wings a-try
To lift, or maybe thrust,
by ignoring drag, or just
By the will of boyish hope,
as his canter speeds to lope;
And seven small balloons
circle ’round, like rainbow moons;
dip and swirl ‘gainst the noon;
flutter, drag to boyish tune
Of hasty dreams, of racing knees
Of birthday dreams on summer breeze.
©2022 Chel Owens

Written in response to Carrot Ranch‘s prompt: balloons on a bumper
September 12, 2022, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about balloons on a bumper. Is it a spectacle, an occasion, an eccentricity? Why are the balloons there? Who is involved? Go where the prompt leads!
Awww what a lovely response to the prompt…who doesn’t love seeing a balloon fly high in the sky 🙂
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It looks so happy!
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How lovely, you’ve really caught the child’s belief
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Thank you, D!
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Just beautiful, Chelsea. Full of wonder, imagination, and a child and mother’s joy. And a few tears of nostalgia too. Loved this.
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Thank you, D. I aimed for that and you’ve made me happy that you felt it.
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❤️
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, Chel! Well done, you.
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❤️ Thank you! I loved the feeling of writing it.
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You’re such a softie, Chel. Must be all that mothering. 😉
Seriously. this is a gem and I can’t let go of these lines:
And seven small balloons
circle ’round, like rainbow moons;
dip and swirl ‘gainst the noon;
flutter, drag to boyish tune
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❤
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🎈
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wonderful job with the prompt, highlighting the carefree nature of youth…
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Thanks, Jim!
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👍
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To be a child with a fist full of balloons – a lovely tribute to childhood.
May we remain children through out out adult lives!! 💖
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Amen!
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Happy Autumn!!
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Lovely and sweet, Chel. As is the photo of you and your infant? ~nan
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❤️ Thank you! No, we haven’t had balloons in awhile but I’m sure my son would love to run and fly with them!
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That is a great poem. The rhythm and rhyme and word choice are as uplifting as the balloons and the boy, it flows, no, flies.
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❤️ Thank you, D.
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