Tiny, the turtle, had a not-so-tiny fear
That nobody would be his friend for Valentine’s, this year.
His teacher, Mrs. Elephant -with not-so-tiny ears-
Had said he would get lots of cards from someone very dear.

“It’s Valentine’s,” she’d trumpeted, as elephants will do,
“A holiday of fun and treats, and cards with hearts for you!”
But Tiny -in his tiny shell, and tiny heart- just knew
That, out of all the animals, he’d get but one or two.
“I’ll have a bunch!” barked Douglas Dog, as sure as he could be.
Chirped Betty, quite the happy bird, “You won’t get more than me!”
And Cora purred, as cats like to, “I want three-hundred-three,
“From all my friends -and candy, too! Oooh! Just you wait and see!”

Tiny made some cards with hearts, to sadly give away.
With not-so-tiny fear, he thought, No one will care; will say,
“Thank you, Tiny. How’d you know? Come be my friend; come play!”
Poor Tiny, in his tiny heart, feared Valentine’s that day.
But Tiny’s doubts and Tiny’s fears; his not-so-tiny cares
All flew away, like Betty Bird, when he got to his chair –
For, at his desk, and on the floor, and falling everywhere;
Were valentines and candy hearts, from everyone. They cared!
©2023 Chel Owens
211 words, according to Wordcounter.net.

Written for Susanna Leonard Hill’s Valentiny Contest. Entries are due soon! You can play along as well!
All images created using MidJourney
Oh, so beautiful. Loved it 😘
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Phew! Thank you, Not Pam.
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This is adorable
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Thank you, Robbie! ❤️
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this is so sweet and beautiful, Chel; you’ve surpassed yourself with this one 🙂
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I really hope so and I really appreciate your saying so, John. ❤️
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be sure to let us know the result, Chel: it’s a fine, fine poem 🙂
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I think she’ll announce the ones who made it to judging in about a week from Valentine’s Day.
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fingers crossed 🙂
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That is just gorgeous, Chelsea. I’m so pleased Tiny was shown the love he deserved.
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Thank you! ❤️ 🐢
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How cool. A story and rhyme and meter! Perfect!
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Thank you, Ruth! 🙂
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❤️
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Aww this is sweet and beautiful Chelsea. A perfect Valentine’s Day children’s story.
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I’m not sure it’s sweet enough. I could add a few balloons and some cotton candy.
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Maybe a few 🥰🥹😍🥰🌸🌸🌼❤️💜🧡💛💚🤎💙💖💗💓💘💝💞💕emojis too.
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Now you’re talking!
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Aww. That was delightful, Chelsea. All Tiny’s worrying was for naught. He had a lovely Valentine’s Day after all. I hope yours is full of cards and chocolate. ❤
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❤️ Thank you I will most definitely fill it with chocolate.
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I like when stories offer a nice lift – and this one did.
Thanks
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Thank you. I’m glad to have offered a lift. 😉
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Awh. Super sweet. 🙂
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Thank you! ❤️
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Impressed by the images you made too. Multi-talented!
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Aw, shucks.
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🙂
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Somehow i missed this, love it Chel deserves finalist staus
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❤️ That means so much to me.
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